The goal of this writing activity was to retell what we did during Easter. We had to remember to use sequencing adverbs at the beginning of our paragraphs.
My Easter holiday
Yay! I can't wait until we get to Aunty Bee's house. We are going to have an egg hunt. It is going to be so FUN!
Firstly Where here finally! I opened the door and ran to the door until I saw Levi “hi Levi”I said happily I saw someone that I haven't seen before. Then I went to the grape bush. I was going to pick one but it had a wasp in it there. There were wasps everywhere so I just went inside.
Secondly I saw Levi and his friend on the deck and I thought how did they get there so fast? They were eating POPCORN!! I love popcorn (especially sweet & salty) . I grabbed a handful and I bit it. It was so delicious then I realised that it was sweet & salty.
Finally my mum and the others went to kayak while Aunty Tammy looked after us.”OK get your shoes on it's time to go Easter egg hunting now” “yay!” we all shouted I ran out the door without putting my shoes on but I didn't care so I just walked to the hill because my feet hurt. I should have put my shoes on actually but everyone was going so I finally made a decision. Quinn (my sister) and Donne and Jerako went on the quad with Aunty Tammy. Me Levi and that other boy who I finally found out his name went down to the river Levi found four I found tow and the other boy went home with his parents.
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